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This one shot contains explicit sexual content that may, if not is, not suitable for children around sixteen to seventeen years or younger. If you are uncomfortable with this kind of work or you simply do not like reading this, please press the back button and read something else immediately. Please do not comment saying that this is explicit and that it is too mature for children and that I should take this down, as I will probably laugh at you. Just kidding, but I will not listen to you if you tell me that, no matter how many reasonable excuses you come up with.

YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!


HOLY MOTHER OF GOD THAT IS HOLY! I finally got this done, and damn does it have some...pretty explicit stuff. :blush: Yes, this is my very first one shot that has a lemon in it, and it's an art trade with *Otromeru. I would say this is out of my comfort zone, but it actually wasn't that bad. For a while, I was getting all "OMG! I can't believe I wrote that! >////<" but towards the end it turned out...reasonably well. I apologize a thousand times for the delay.

Unfortunately, I'm not satisfied with how I ended it. I couldn't think of anything better to put for it, soI figured I'd throw a little comedy in the end. I just picture Matt having comedy to him, even in the most romantic of times. :3 Also, I have a bad feeling that I screwed up Neru's personality...again. She doesn't seem like the type to get jealous very easily, so I decided to have her a little ticked off that Matt talked about Misa on more than one occasion while she was in the room. :ninja: I know it sounds like the definition of "jealous," but I did my best not to make it seem like that. Sorry if it's not.

One last thing, the reason why I have that thing up there is pretty self-explanatory. There's...well, there's sex in the damn one shot! XD It's probably not the best you've seen, but it's my first one, so bear with me. Also, for those people who get all "ERMAGERD!" about lemons and whatnot, please don't go leaving a super long comment talking about how I shouldn't be writing stuff like this or how there are children on here that could read this. For starters, it's the only one I've done thus far, plus I'm very much aware of the children that reside on dA. In my opinion, though, people read at their own risks, and it's their choice if they want to read stuff like this. Curiosity killed the cat, and satisfaction brought it back. I know I'm one of those people who's curious to look at Mature Rated pictures cause...well, I'm curious, but I've only got at least a month until I'm eighteen (it's in February). That's not the point. My point is that children are gonna find stuff on here that's not suitable for their age, and they'll want to know what it is anyway. I'm not saying a twelve year old boy has the right to see a pair of tits or a little girl should have the opportunity to see a man's junk, but stuff like that happens every day because parents don't watch what their kids do on the internet. If someone, say a twelve year old (back to that again), comes here wanting to read this, they see the warning I left and refuse to look at it, it's out of my hands. I wrote this for an art trade, that person requested a lemon in it, and I've done my part with the whole maturity rating stuff. Once they press that button, it's out of my hands.

Sorry for getting all long and ranty, but I want people to be clear that people should feel free to read at their own risk and to not take it out on me. I hope I made sense. :/

To see her part of the trade, look here:


Death Note © Tsugumi Ohba
Neru © *Otromeru
Story © *SRN713
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GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH OMG
YOU DON'T KNOW HOW MANY TIME I HAD TO STOP READING AND BLUSHED >///<
My face is all red now! I CAN'T EVEN :iconcannotevenplz:
Thank you for making my day!Million times LOVE IT.
Oh who am I kidding...
LET ME HUG YOOOOUUUU :iconletmehugyouplz: